Sunday, March 22, 2015

Chapter 1 in Convergent (book me and Annie are making) (next book to Allegiant)

Chapter One    Tobias
5 years later……
“I never thought the day would come. The day Tris dies. I never imagined it.” I say, wiping the tears off my face. Christina looks up at me also crying.
“Four, it’s been 6 years. We got to go somewhere safe were we no one will find us.”
“NO!” I yell.
“Were fine” We are actually not fine. I just don’t want to leave the place where my girlfriend died. Last night I overheard Matthew talking to some people about a new serum. Something about reviving the dead? I hope they can make that serum Tris can be alive again. That would be…… It would be amazing. Finally hearing her beautiful voice talk to me again. I can only dream.
“Well I am going to the cafeteria for lunch. You want anything?” Christina asks.
“No I’ll be fine.”
“Suit yourself.” Christina leaves. I’m all alone. I see bullets in the walls. It seems like yesterday we were fighting for the death serum to find out about Edith Prior. In a few minutes I hear big footsteps. It’s Matthew.
“Tobias! Come quick! We have something you’re going to love!” He yells. I run toward Matthew and follow him into the room where I found out I was genetically damaged and not divergent.
“What is it?” I ask.
 “We found out how to bring back the non-existence!” Matthew says happily.
“What happens is that you injected the serum into the dead body’s vane. The serum goes through the vane and into the heart. It makes them come back to life! And you’re never going to guess who were testing it on……. Tris.” Matthew says.
“Really!?” I say excitedly. “Cause if this works, Tris will be alive again and everything is going to be back to normal!”
 “Correct.” Matthew says. Matthew brings Tris’ dead body in the room. I start to cry a little but not enough to let the others see me. He takes the serum and injects it into Tris’ arm.

       

1 comment:

  1. like or comment if you want this book published? (There is more we just don't want to spoil it.)

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